From a WIP entitled Dancer of the Nile
Nima the Dancer and Kamin, an Egyptian soldier, are on the run after escaping from their enemies. They’ve taken temporary refuge in a nomad camp for a few days as welcomed guests.
“I want to dance for you,” Nima said licking a dab of spiced yogurt from her fingers.
Pausing in the act of raising his mug to drink, Kamin stared at her, the memory of her sinuous performance in the Hyksos camp fresh in his mind.
“A private dance,” she continued, blushing, not meeting his eyes. “How you choose to reward me for my skill is up to you.”
“When do you propose to provide me this performance?” I’m supposed to meet the clan chief in a few minutes but he can go swim in the lake of fire for all I care, if she’s offering her dance now.
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Chief or sexy dance? Such a decision!
lol. Love how he’s ready to drop everything!
Such a dilemma for the hero, love it! Sexy 6!
Its good to know your priorities, LOL! Fun and sexy six! 🙂
Thanks for the comments, glad you enjoyed the little scene.I had to chuckle a bit as I wrote it, must admit!
Oh, this is different! I like it a lot!
Thank you! I do enjoy writing in the Ancient Egyptian time frame…
Lol, I like his inner voice. 🙂
Um, yeah, the clan chief can wait! 🙂
That’d be my choice too, NO doubt!
Very enticing!
Haha! Go swim in a lake of fire. I love a hero who has his priorities straight!
Gayle, Patricia & Karysa, thanks! Glad you enjoyed….
Not so sure. He must realize she could be in big trouble if he stands up the chief.
Good point indeed! Fortunately Nima the heroine has a more level head, at least about this!
Fun six! I like the spiced yogurt — nice touch.