Continuing on with my series of snippets from backlist books which were memorable scenes for me…there are more than one in each book of course!
When it comes to WRECK OF THE NEBULA DREAM, my “Titanic in space” novel, there’s a scene where Nick and his friends are trying to rescue two children who are trapped in their cabin with tons of debris blocking their path to escape.
Years later I wrote STAR CRUISE RETURN VOYAGE, book three in this series, to give the little girl some closure on her experiences as a grown woman on a sister ship.
The snippet:
Nick and Khevan managed to move some of the lightweight panels out of the way, only to be faced with a tangled pile of circuitry, luggage, clothes and, finally, when they dug far enough, the door to the bathroom, which had been blown inward and warped to block the entrance to the children’s room.
“Paolo, are you okay?” Mara called, as Nick and Khevan took a break to assess the best way to proceed.
“Yes.” There was a pause. “But Mommy’s not awake yet. Gianna’s frightened.”
“Well, she’s a very little girl,” Mara reminded the boy soothingly, exchanging glances with Nick and Khevan. “She’s lucky to have a big brother like you.”
“Did you – did you see my dad anywhere?”
Mara sighed. Taking a deep breath, she answered cheerfully, even while making a sad-faced grimace to Nick. “No, sweetheart, I didn’t find him, but I’ve got the next best thing out here – a Special Forces captain and a D’nvannae Brother. Exactly like in an adventure holo, you know? They came for you and Gianna.”
“And Mommy.” The boy’s voice wavered.
Hand to her mouth, Mara nodded. “Yes, they’re here to help your mother, too.”
Nick dusted off his hands and rolled his shoulders, wincing with pain from the earlier collision with his bed frame. “I’m going to crawl under and see if I can’t force the bedroom door to open wider. Then the kids can make their way to me or I’ll work my way back to where they are. Either way, I’ll get them out. Mara, take the first child, and head for the undamaged corridor area. Get beyond the blast door inlet, got it?” Nick made sure she acknowledged this critical safety instruction. “Don’t come back in here once you’ve gotten out. No matter what.”
Wrapping his hands in torn clothing from the mess on the cabin floor, Khevan got a firm grip on the edges of the warped bathroom door. Exerting maximum effort, the Brother was able to raise it enough for Nick to wriggle under, then worm his way through the partially open door of the second stateroom. He shoved his way into the darkness of the children’s bedroom, pushing the hand lamp in front of him, trying not to think about all the hundreds of tons of debris piled above him. Standing up as soon as he cleared the threshold, lamp in hand, Nick faced a tangled mess, hardly recognizable as a bedroom. The bulkhead flexed intermittently in an alarming fashion, accompanied by the shriek and groan of overstressed metal.
Not much time before the wall goes and we go with it. Sweeping the pale light over the room, he found the children huddled together against one overturned bed. “Hi, remember me? I’m Nick. I was on the shuttle with you guys a few days ago.”
“You took the knife away from the lady. And you rescued Gianna when she was drowning.” Paolo nodded in the gloom. He got up and pulled his sister forward, dragging her with one chubby hand clamped around her wrist. She eyed Nick dubiously, left thumb firmly planted in her mouth, the other hand clutching the big teddy bear.
“Okay, Paolo, you seem like a pretty level-headed trooper,” Nick said, squatting to be at eye level with the boy. “We need to get out of here as fast as possible. You see the outer wall there?”
Paolo nodded. “It’s going to break, isn’t it?”
Nick tried to be reassuring. “We’ll be long gone first. Now, can you help me get your sister –”
“Her name’s Gianna.” The boy pushed his sister closer to Nick.
“Help me get Gianna to crawl out through all the mess to my friends? We’ve made a tunnel for you. She’ll have to leave her toy, though.”
The girl hugged the bear tightly and shook her head, trying to retreat from her brother and Nick. “Won’t,” she informed Nick, taking her thumb out of her mouth briefly.
“Sweetheart, we have to go. It’s going to get pretty windy and cold in here soon.” Don’t scare her, if she retreats deeper into the wreckage, might not be able to retrieve her. With an effort, Nick kept his voice level and calm.
“Carry me.” She raised her arms to him, the bear dangling in one grubby hand.
“Sorry, I can’t, there isn’t room,” he said with a small laugh, reaching out to tousle her hair. “We have to crawl. It’s like a game but really important. Tell her, Paolo.”
“Captain, what’s going on? Did you find them?” Khevan yelled from the other side of the debris barrier. “We’re running out of time.”
Nick ignored him, focusing on the scared children. He kept his voice reasonable. “Okay, Gianna, I tell you what, you go first and then your brother will follow. The bear and I’ll bring up the rear.”
She regarded him solemnly with huge eyes. “Promise?”
“I promise.” Hurriedly he crossed his heart.
She thrust the bear at him. “He’s not a toy. His name is Huntington the Bear.”
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