Going back to my SFR , which – STATUS CHANGE – is now an R&R, working on the comments with fingers crossed!
Set in the same universe as my recently published WRECK of the NEBULA DREAM. Andrianda (Andi) Markriss, a planetary representative for Loxton Galactic Trading, has been spending a lazy summer with her best friend in the highly exclusive summer compound of the planet Zulaire’s ruling nobility, networking. On a day when a number of strange and disturbing things have already happened, Captain Tom Deverane, Sectors Special Forces, unexpectedly shows up with a troop of soldiers and demands she leave with him. Immediately.
Andi doesn’t take this very well….in fact, she refuses to go. Later in the evening, all hell has broken loose, as the captain predicted.
Trying to avoid spoilers here, after certain “events”, she and the soldiers are on the run.
In the excerpt three weeks ago Tom was taken suddenly ill. Last week Tom and Andi discussed his near fatal illness. He’s recovering…the conversation continues (had to skip ahead due to spoilers so this is NOT directly after last week’s excerpt)…:
Aching to touch him, Andi settled for tracing the dagger and comet tattoo on his bicep with her forefinger. “Special Forces?”
“Yes – I have a couple in other, more interesting places.”
“I know, I’ve seen them,” she said, blushing, not meeting his eyes. “Mitch and the monks needed my help when you were so sick.”
“I’m not sick now.”
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SQUEE! Congrats on the R&R! 😀
TYVM, I was excited and I did really resonate with the suggestions they made….
Now that was a promising place to stop (so unfair though) LOL Great six.
Love the tension!
Nope…he’s definitely not sick anymore. LOL! One thing never changes no matter how far in the future we go. 😉
Hmmm? I wonder where the other tattoos are?
Sounds like she’s going to see them again 🙂 Love his remark about not being sick anymore. Great six!
That is so like a man. Still in bed from a near-fatal illness and only one thing on his mind. Great six!
Oh the thought of where those tattoos could be….hmmmm, I’ve got a few ideas and I’m pretty sure I’m not wrong! LOL! And offering to show them off means he’s feeling a LOT better! ROTFL! Great six!
I’m pretty sure you’re not wrong either LOL!
lol. Her response really didn’t slow him down at all, did it?
Oooh, love the sexual tension between these two. Captain Tom is my hero. Excellent six!!
What great dialogue! So realistic. I bet if you continue in sequence we’ll be seeing those other tattoos next Sunday.
Great six! I love the tension and the dialogue is great too.
Very tantalizing six! I also love the dialogue.
Congrats on the R&R 😀 looking forward to reading the next status change
Love the sensual way this 6 starts, her admitting what she’s seen and his response. Yummy 6!!
Eee! Congrats on the R&R! And love your six as normal. The tension and chemistry between these two… -fans self- I’d like to see those tattoos!
Oooh, I love it! so sexy and so sensual. Wonderful six!
Nice six! And good luck on the R&R!
Woot! Turning up the heat! 🙂
When these two finally get down and dirty, it’s going to be HOT.
Yes, taking care of a sick man does reveal a lot.
Congrats on the status change! That’s always a great feeling. I love the build up in this six. Nice chemistry.
Sounds great!
If he’s not sick now I’m thinking they’re ready to make up for lost time. Great 6!
Ooh, love the stopping point…he’s definitely not sick anymore LOL.
Now I need to know where the other tattoos are!
LOLOLOL! This made me burst out laughing! Great pacing and rhythm for the last line! Pitch perfect!
And congrats on the R&R!!!
Thank you everyone, for the comments and sharing my enjoyment of this scene :-). Am diligently working away on the R&R, mostly about adding a few scenes….I appreciate the support from all the Sunday Sixers, you have NO idea!!!
Love the last line! I just wonder where they might be? 😉
Sure sounds like he’s recovered! And I bet he demonstrates how well he is. LOL Great six!
I love the sense of intimacy her tracing of the tattoo evokes. Very nice six!
Awesome six! Can’t wait to read more 😀
LOL — he’s too funny. I love it. And congrats on the R&R. I’ve got my fingers crossed for you. 🙂