Gods of Warfare? Weekend Writing Warriors

Warriors logo revisedHere’s the link to the Weekend Writing Warriors central page, so you can visit all the participants sharing excerpts today…a fun way to sample new books and find new authors!

While we’re waiting for my next two new books (one ancient Egypt – at the formatter –  and one science fiction romance – at the editor), here’s another snippet from Magic of the Nile. Tyema has persuaded Captain Sahure to tell her a bit about past battles. He’s talking about the enemy. (Snippet is edited from the published version to provide a complete thought in just 10 sentences):

“They no doubt thought themselves to be gods of warfare, having placed three men in a chariot. The enemy that day had a driver, a shield bearer and a spearman in each vehicle.” Sahure laughed, as if the memory was a pleasing one. “Fools.”

Seeing his amusement, Tyema was puzzled. “Extra manpower and weapons must give an advantage, surely?”

“But consider the weight of three men such as myself in a chariot,” he said, “Requires the vehicle to be heavier and therefore slower. Ours turn in the wink of an eye, you’ve experienced that yourself when we’ve practiced driving.”

Tyema nodded agreement, remembering the excitement of the horses galloping full out and then wheeling in a great arc, dust flying, as she redirected them in a maneuver Sahure had assured her was typical on the battlefield. She tried to imagine hundreds of chariots coming together in combat, shivering at the mental picture.

I thought since we had a baby shower last week,  it might be good balance to share a different kind of scene today.

When I have to describe warfare or battles in my Egyptian  novels, I go directly to the 3000 year old descriptions the Pharaohs themselves recorded, and draw inspiration…drawing below was done in the 1800’s, based on tomb paintings.


MagicOfTheNile_600x900The story:

After a childhood spent scorned and ignored by her family because of her crippled foot, Tyema was magically healed then installed as the High Priestess of his temple by Sobek the Crocodile God. But Tyema is still haunted by her memories, scarred by the abuse she endured. Despite Sobek’s protection, as an adult she’s become a near recluse inside the temple grounds…

 Until Captain Sahure arrives in her remote town, sent from Thebes on an urgent mission for Pharaoh, requiring High Priestess Tyema’s help. From that moment on, her quiet, safe life is upended in ways she never could have expected.

 But after a whirlwind romance with Sahure, the two part as Pharaoh orders him to undertake another assignment on Egypt’s dangerous frontier, far from Tyema’s remote town.

 Heart-broken, Tyema is ready to return to her life of loneliness, official duties and, now, regret. But the Crocodile God has other plans for his priestess: she must uncover the sorcerer who threatens Pharaoh’s life with black magic. Soon enough, Tyema finds herself thrown into the chaos of Pharoah’s court, neck deep in intrigue and danger. Just when she thinks she can’t take the pressures of a very public court life and her secret investigation for the Crocodile God any longer, Sahure re-enters the scene.

 But is her former love there to help or to hinder? Can they resolve their differences and work together to find the dark sorcerer who threatens Pharaoh and Egypt?

39 comments on “Gods of Warfare? Weekend Writing Warriors

  1. Once again, I learn from your snippet, Veronica. I like that he shares strategy with her. Good 8!

    No post for me this week. Just making my rounds to read what’s new. Have a good week. 🙂

  2. That paints an amazing picture, all those chariots and men. Great snippet, Veronica, and so nice to see you in Snippet Sunday! 🙂

  3. Nifty piece! And the blurb sounds enticing, Veronica. I like the background you’ve given Tyema, creating a magical world in history.

    • There’s research to indicate at least one Egyptian queen of the general era where my novels are set drove a chariot, so I felt confident having Tyema learn to handle one. The chariot is kind of a subtheme in the novel…glad you enjoyed the excerpt!

  4. You always do such a marvelous job with your descriptions, Veronica! Very excited about this story and all the other work that’s happening in the background. You’re a busy lady, which is good for all of us! 🙂

  5. Wonderful imagery! I could well imagine the dust flying with hundreds of chariots in battle.

    • Exactly. Sahure talks a little more about this, and also how the enemy was relying primarily on spears, so the Egyptian archers represented superior weaponry as well.

  6. Those are some excellent things to consider regarding chariots and horses. So many modern folks have forgotten what it’s like to rely on horsepower, and wouldn’t even know how to set up a good chariot.

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