Here’s the link to the Weekend Writing Warriors central page, so you can visit all the participants sharing excerpts today…a fun way to sample new books and find new authors! (Also welcome to the Sunday Snippet visitors!)
Sharing now from my newly released scifi romance Aydarr (A Badari Warriors SciFi Romance Novel): Sectors New Allies Series Book 1. Yup, a mouthful LOL!
Continuing on directly from last week’s excerpt. A little creative editing and punctuation have been done to fit our rules.
The excerpt:
The creature watched her and moved forward a bit from the tunnel, the front segment of its body sinking onto the ground, while the rest remained in the tunnel. The segmented body expanded like a child’s toy as the predator closed the space between them. Opening an outsize mouth, revealing a yellow, forked tongue, the animal hissed and reared as if preparing to charge at her.
Jill shouted defiance in a combination of rage and fear, and threw the rock hard, striking one glowing eye in the center, shattering the facets. She dodged as the predator made a high pitched sound like an exploding generator and lunged toward where she’d been. As she scrambled in the slick muddy water at the bottom of the trap, she searched for another rock, finding only small ones. She gathered a handful of them as better than nothing and spun around as the half-blind animal tried to locate her.
With a hoarse yell, a man jumped into the pit from above and landed between her and the predator. He didn’t seem to have a weapon but, as the lightning flashed, briefly illuminating the scene in stark white light, Jill gaped. Were those talons? He glanced over his shoulder at her briefly as if to see how she was doing then made a dash at the animal, slashing its neck before dancing away.
The book blurb:
Jill Garrison, a maintenance tech at the Sectors Amarcae 7 colony, goes to sleep one night as usual only to wake up in her nightgown stranded in the middle of a forest on an unknown world. There’s no time to think as she’s stalked by carnivorous predators and rescued by genetically engineered warriors calling themselves the Badari. Turns out they and she, along with her whole colony, are now prisoners of the Khagrish, a ruthless race of alien scientists. Working for enemies of the Sectors, the Khagrish have created the Badari to be super soldiers.
Aydarr, the Badari alpha, isn’t sure he can trust Jill but his attraction to her is undeniable. He impulsively claims her as his mate to prevent her death at the hands of the Khagrish.
Can he continue to protect her from the experiments already underway? Will his claiming her put his pack in jeopardy from their alien masters?
As Jill searches for a way to rescue her fellow humans and get them all to safety, she finds herself falling for Aydarr, despite the secrets he’s keeping. She has a few of her own.
The situation becomes dire when Aydarr and his pack are sent offplanet on a mission, leaving Jill unprotected, prey for the senior scientist. Can she escape the experiments he has in mind for her? Will she be able to thwart the Khagrish plans and liberate humans and Badari alike? How will she and Aydarr reunite?
Yay for rescue. 🙂 🙂
I love Jill’s bravery! A very intriguing snippet! 🙂
Who needs weapons when you have talons?
“dancing away?” … great descriptions, great snippet
Great description! She’s in quite a position -relief at being rescued but scared of the rescuer with talons.
She’s got a good aim! I liked the description of the animal.
No weapon but talons will do quite nicely. Good snippet. Tweeted.
Very tense snippet! Sounds like her rescuer might be dangerous too, which is a good thing, at least right now. 🙂
I love his talons. Oh yes! thanks good friend and a big Hug.
Wow, what a thrilling scene! Fantastic action and descriptions throughout. Love how quick-thinking Jill is, and hooray for Talon Man!
Gives a whole new meaning to Santa Claws. 😀 Great snippet, Veronica.
Another exciting snippet! I think I might be almost as worried about the man with the talons as the monster-thingy.
Your descriptions of the monster and the man are wonderful as always. The whole snippet sucked me into the scene and the action, like I was right there. Can’t wait for the coming fight! Great snippet!
Now THAT’S how a hero makes an entrance! Great descriptions and emotional responses.
Thanks for the nightmare fuel and action scene! 😉
What an exciting scene. Great imagery. I want to know who the guy is too., 🙂
Well, the talons might be disturbing, but yay for the rescue!
Wonderfully vivid and action filled scene – I think I might be a bit wary of a man with talons, but hey – the beast seems a much worse option!
That’s one scary monster and a great action scene.
Thanks for all the comments – glad the scene is working for people! I had fun writing it 🙂
Excellent choice for today’s snippet. Jill puts up a good front, but here comes the hero! Did I tell you I enjoyed this book?
Well, she certainly tried! But I’m glad she got some help before she had to keep trying.
I loved the talons and the dramatic way the hero and heroine meet, made me want to read more!