Welcome to my weekly excerpt from Darik (A Badari Warriors SciFi Romance Novel): Sectors New Allies Series Book 4, my best selling new scifi romance action adventure novel!
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Punctuation may be wonky to comply with our guidelines here. May be edited a bit from published version.
The excerpt – Darik is arguing with MARL12, his Artificial Intelligence (AI) sidekick, who refused to assist him in taking down a force field barrier and rescuing Nicolle. from a large predator (Nicolle has left the spot to rejoin the other humans.)
“I thought I was going to watch her get eaten by that beast,” he said to his AI, clenching his hand on the pulse rifle’s stock, “If you ever deny a request from me in such a way again, you and I are through, and I’ll do my best to destroy you.”
“Rescuing the humans is not a mission parameter,” MARL12 floated at what he probably calculated was a safe distance.
Swallowing hard, Darik took a moment to master his anger, “Well, saving them should be. ” He reflected the need for his report at the end of this mission to contain a few harsh comments about the MARL subunit’s inability to respond to changes in the operation in the field, on the fly.
“If I had interrupted the force barrier to allow you to rescue the woman, the Khagrish would have been alerted. There wasn’t a sufficient chance of success in extracting the entire group of humans and conveying them to safety at this time. Neither you nor I can communicate with those in the sanctuary valley headquarters except at the specific times when MARL primary will be listening for my short burst signal.”
“I’m done talking about it,” Darik hated to admit the AI had even a small kernel of rationality on which to hang its argument.
He wracked his brain for a way to free her if MARL12 continued to refuse to provide assistance, but there was no way known to the Badari to break through a Khagrish force field. He could do a frontal assault on the Khagrish lab itself, of course, but a one-man attack was doomed to fail.
The blurb:
Nicolle James is far from her home in the human Sectors, kidnapped by alien scientists to be the subject of horrifying experiments. Her only hope might be a mysterious soldier she’d glimpsed outside the laboratory fence. She’d managed to sneak a few words of conversation with him when her captors weren’t watching but now the aliens were taking her inside the lab to begin the experiments.
Darik, a warrior of the genetically engineered Badari pack, is on a solo recon mission to check out a mysterious new lab high in the mountains. His orders are strict – do not engage. But when he has a chance meeting with the woman who might be his mate, he vows not to abandon her, orders or no orders.
Can he get inside an underground lab, find Nicolle and rescue her without getting captured himself? And when he learns the lab’s deadly secrets, can he get word to his pack about the new dangers?
Because the ruthless alien scientist running the experiments wants to get her hands on him too and will stop at nothing to achieve her goals.
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Sounds like MARL 12 isn’t the best sidekick. I wonder how long it’ll be around, or if it will learn to adapt.
Doomed to fail – Yikes. I hope he comes up with a better plan.
This book is so good. My favorite so far!
Bestselling, eh? I’m delighted it’s doing well for you!
Yeah, it might be better if he didn’t attack on his own. Hope he’ll be able to get her out, though.
Congrats on your success with the book, Veronica! Love what I read here, and Darik’s determination/stubbornness. Great work! 🙂
Oh no – he’s out of ideas. What’s next?
He will come up with the best plan. Outstanding snippet, my friend. Hugs again, Charmaine
Oh, the frustration of dealing with logic!! Always correct, but not always right. Nice tease!
Sounds like the logic is seeping through a little there at the end. Love his determination to save her in the face of everything.
Thanks for the comments! Yes, Darik is definitely working on a plan to outsmart the Artificial Intelligence MARL12 and find a way to rescue Lily. Of course then nothing goes as planned, because there wouldn’t be a story otherwise…!
Bad MARL! Trying to confuse the issue with facts and rationality!
Logic has its place, but pure logic has no room for the mess of life. In this case, I think they made the right choice–more lives lost if they’d tipped their hand too soon.
Congrtulations with this, it sounds like a great book – unlike Marl who doesn’t seem too great at compassion even if he (it) is coldly logical!
This is a fierce snippet! I love it!
That AI is too rational. No wonder Darik is furious.
And that’s the problem with an AI. Nice excerpt. I like how determined he is to save her.
Probably shouldn’t plan an attack if he’s on his own, but I love that he’s determined. to save her.
Sounds like that AI is going to cause trouble very soon. Wonder if he can get it to cooperate?
Love the straight forward emotion and talk in this snippet.
I understand why he couldn’t save her. He will have to come up with another plan.