Today is the Day Weekend Writing Warriors

Here’s the link to the Weekend Writing Warriors central page, so you can visit all the participants sharing excerpts today…a fun way to sample new books and find new authors! (Also welcome to the Sunday Snippet visitors!)

May be edited a bit from published version.

I’m doing a few excerpts from HEIRESS OF THE NILE, my most recent ancient Egyptian paranormal romance.

The snippet –  Last week General Marnamaret’s thoughts turned to marriage and he decided to settle…

The decision brought him no comfort. A loveless marriage sounded abhorrent to him. He wanted what his parents had enjoyed, the proof of which was painted all over his father’s tomb, in lively and happy vignettes depicting the best times the two shared. His mother had no fear of the Afterlife, because she was unshakable in her belief they’d be reunited.

Marnamaret shivered, fierce soldier that he was. If I pick the wrong woman now, will I be tied to her for all the millions of years of Afterlife? A more daunting prospect than facing a line of Hyksos chariots while on foot and unarmed. Seized by an unaccustomed whimsy, he went to the household altar, which was dedicated to the primary Great Ones worshipped by his family, made obeisance and whispered a name which rarely fell from his lips, although his mother and sister prayed to her often.

“Great One Hathor, Mother of us all, I beg your help in finding the love of my life, the woman to stand with me as partner, side by side, arm in arm, the way my own parents are depicted in their tomb carvings. Clearly I can’t accomplish this on my own since I’m still unmarried.” He grinned at the idea of himself praying to the goddess, which wasn’t something soldiers often did. Setting the sacrificial fruit, beer and bread on the altar, he bowed his head.

A breeze wafted across the roof and he caught the scent of the blue lotus, which was odd because his house was some distance from the Nile. Goosebumps rose on his arms and he pulled his red cloak closer.

Today is the day.

Marnamaret was on his feet instantly, hand on his dagger but the roof was empty. Had the goddess truly whispered to him or was he beguiled by the breeze?

VS: Next week I may jump to the third character who has a role in the situation, Pebatma’s younger brother…we’ll skip a fun conversation between the general and his mother but I’m only supposed to be supplying enticing snippets, right?

I’m always fascinated that the Egyptians thought in terms of  a million of this or that…who in the ancient world ever had a million of anything?

The book blurb: 1550 BCE – Forced by a vengeful Pharaoh to flee for her life and hide in the poorest section of Thebes, Lady Pebatma has scraped and struggled to support her ailing mother and young brother for the past two years. Now, out of funds with the rent to pay and no possessions left to sell, she begs the goddess Hathor for help. With a new pharaoh taking the throne, surely something can be done…

A powerful general in command of the army and best friend to Pharaoh, Marnamaret has everything a nobleman in Egypt could desire…except for true love. He refuses to settle for less. On a whim, he prays to Hathor to send him the woman of his dreams.Will the goddess answer these heartfelt petitions? And if she does, will Shai the god of Fate allow the course of two lives to be changed by love? For none can deny Fate….

Author’s Note: This is a connected series. Heiress of the Nile can be read as a standalone. Although it’s my newest novel, the story falls between Priestess and Warrior timewise and is set in the early days of this Pharaoh’s reign.

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13 comments on “Today is the Day Weekend Writing Warriors

  1. Oh wow, intriguing. Not only did I like his train of thought of being with his wife in the afterlife, but also the mysterious voice. Great snippet.

  2. Definitely an enticing snippet! I love that he is praying for a relationship like his parents and is concerned not only about life on Earth, but in the afterlife as well! Wonderful!

  3. He’s a very forward thinking man to bring an offering to the goddess who might control his future happiness. I’m really liking this couple! Great snippet!

  4. If it were me I’d be looking at every woman I came in contact with to see if she was the one. I imagine it won’t be anyone he might expect it to be.

  5. I already posted one comment which didn’t seem to come through, so forgive me if I send two. I’d be looking at every woman I met that day in hopes that she’d be the one. I imagine he’ll be surprised who the woman is.

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