The Alien Turtle Is Naughty Snippet from STAR CRUISE TIME LOOP “Groundhog Day in Space”

Eyn the alien turtle (or moyed)

May be edited a bit from published version.

From  STAR CRUISE: TIME LOOP, my “Groundhog Day in space story)

Excerpt: From the beginning of the novella.  Raelyn and her pet are back on the ship, with the odd glass bauble that may or may not be an ancient alien artifact. Her alarm wakes her…

Five perfectly modulated crystalline notes, designed to bring the deepest sleeper to consciousness with no disruption…

In the morning, Raelyn ignored the gentle chimes from the Ship’s Artificial Intelligence even though she’d selected the sound of the alarm specifically. In a futile effort to deny reality she tried to stay in bed. Her head ached from overindulging a bit at the crew party the night before. She asked the Ship for headclear and once the inject popped up on the bedside table, promptly took the full dosage. As the ache in her temples stopped pounding, and her thinking became clearer, she took a look at the time and swore.

“Damn it, I’m going to be late.”

Rising to her feet, she was a bit dizzy but headed for the bathroom. As she went she noticed her carryall was open and various items were strewn around the table. “You’ve been busy and naughty,” she said to Eyn, clucking her tongue. The moyed loved glittering objects and was known to haul small things away to secret caches.

Eyn was standing with his front paws on the odd glass bubble she’d bought on impulse at the end of the trip. He was staring fixedly into the misty center and his tongue flickered in and out as if he was trying to taste the captured air inside. Disconcerted by how intent her pet was, Raelyn reached for him. “You’ve seen your reflection before for star’s sake. Be careful or you’ll push it off—”

VS: So what do we think will happen next?

NOTE: The turtle was a tribute to my brother, who has always had pet turtles and who does turtle rescues where he lives today.

Raelyn Cantorini, senior stewardess on the interstellar cruise ship Nebula Zephyr thinks the alien artifact she bought on the last planet the ship visited was just a pretty glass orb…until her pet Eyn knocked the ornament off a table, shattering it and sending her into an infinitely repeating time loop.

Stuck reliving the same day over and over, Raelyn has only hours to try to save the ship and everyone on board from dying in a terrible catastrophe. As she tries to solve the mystery of what happens to the ship right before midnight each time the day repeats, Raelyn meets Kev Stevens, the former Special Forces soldier turned actor and finds herself falling in love with him. Each time the day repeats, she learns more about him while he has no memory of her. Can she persuade him they’ve met before? Will he trust her enough to help stop the Nebula Zephyr’s destruction?

And if they do save the ship, will that reset time for Raelyn?

This is a lightly edited rerelease of my novella from the Pets in Space 6 anthology. No new material has been added.

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We Meet the Alien Turtle STAR CRUISE TIME LOOP Snippet

Eyn – the alien turtle

VS: From STAR CRUISE TIME LOOP (“GROUNDHOG DAY in space…”)

Excerpt: From the beginning of the novella – an alien glass orb has caught our Female Main Character’s eye while on shore leave:

Stressed, Raelyn wanted to set the orb down and walk away but found the idea of relinquishing the item was more than she could deal with. “All right, you win.” She found another ten credit token and placed them both on the table. Ignoring the profuse thanks from the vendor, she tucked the expensive impulse item in her carryall and sprinted to the shuttle. Her friends pulled her aboard as the large groundcar began to move and she heaved a sigh of relief as she fell into a seat.

This is not the week to come to the captain’s attention in a negative way. 

Back in her small cabin aboard the luxury cruise liner, in orbit far above the planet, Raelyn craved a shower more than anything. The weather on Mabann Two had gone from balmy to humid and hot in a few hours while she was there. She could examine her purchases later, after dinner maybe. Stripping out of her casual clothes, she paused at the side table next to the bed and extended her arm. “All right, Eyn, we’re home.”

The red-and-purple spotted bracelet around her wrist twitched and uncurled, becoming a moyed from her home planet, blinking at her sleepily from three eyes for a moment before leaping from her wrist to the large, ornate shell which was its home.

Pets weren’t allowed on the ship ordinarily, although exceptions were made, but Eyn was more than that, being a symbol of Raelyn’s clan and emblematic of the deity to which her tribe prayed. The goddess she worshipped was believed to use the moyeds to transmit messages and to observe the human activities, and the oldest folktales said the planet itself was carried on the back of a giant moyed.

She’d had Eyn since she was a girl, acquiring the creature in a special ritual which she barely remembered anymore. The cruise line for which she worked was accommodating to crew members’ special needs and it pleased Raelyn to have a companion from home. She’d roamed the Sectors as a stewardess for the CLC Line and loved her travels but Eyn was a nice tie to her place of origin and her family.

The Ship’s chief hydroponic officer allowed her to raise a special variety of insects for Eyn to eat in a small enclosure on Deck Nine.

Now, the little creature scooted into its shell and snapped the front flap shut.

With a chuckle, Raelyn took herself into the bathroom and a relaxing shower.

The book blurb:

Raelyn Cantorini, senior stewardess on the interstellar cruise ship Nebula Zephyr thinks the alien artifact she bought on the last planet the ship visited was just a pretty glass orb…until her pet Eyn knocked the ornament off a table, shattering it and sending her into an infinitely repeating time loop.

Stuck reliving the same day over and over, Raelyn has only hours to try to save the ship and everyone on board from dying in a terrible catastrophe. As she tries to solve the mystery of what happens to the ship right before midnight each time the day repeats, Raelyn meets Kev Stevens, the former Special Forces soldier turned actor and finds herself falling in love with him. Each time the day repeats, she learns more about him while he has no memory of her. Can she persuade him they’ve met before? Will he trust her enough to help stop the Nebula Zephyr’s destruction?

And if they do save the ship, will that reset time for Raelyn?

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Don’t Drop the Orb Weekend Writing Warriors

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May be edited a bit from published version.

I’ve switched to my upcoming new release STAR CRUISE: TIME LOOP,  which is in the Pets in Space 6 anthology, releasing October 5th.

Excerpt: From the beginning of the novella, continuing on from last week when a glass bauble at a vendor’s stall caught Raelyn’s eye: 

She was surprised to feel warmth against her palm rather than the cool surface of a glass object but it had been in the sun. Gazing into the orb, she saw what looked like iridescent mist floating. Everything about the object was pleasing and she thought maybe she’d keep it for herself. “Ten credits,” she said.

A passerby in a hurry jogged her elbow and she nearly dropped the glass knickknack. Juggling it, she managed to avoid the disaster.

The seller hissed between jagged, discolored teeth. “Careful, honored visitor. Bad things will happen if the orb shatters.”

“I’d have to pay you for nothing, you mean,” she said in good humor. Digging in her purse, she came up with a ten credit token. This planet dealt in metal money, which was a charming throwback and a bit inconvenient.

“Twenty.”

Oh no, now she wants to bargain. Frustrated at being drawn into the negotiation she’d hoped to avoid, Raelyn ground her teeth, loathing the idea of leaving a unique find behind.

“Hey, Cantorini, we’re leaving.” The shouted admonition came from one of the Nebula Zephyr’s other stewards. He stood beside the ground shuttle, holding the door and gesturing to her urgently. “The captain said not to be late getting back to the ship, remember?”

‘Eyn’ – the alien turtle

The book blurb:

Raelyn Cantorini, senior stewardess on the interstellar cruise ship Nebula Zephyr thinks the alien artifact she bought on the last planet the ship visited was just a pretty glass orb…until her pet Eyn knocked the ornament off a table, shattering it and sending her into an infinitely repeating time loop.

Stuck reliving the same day over and over, Raelyn has only hours to try to save the ship and everyone on board from dying in a terrible catastrophe. As she tries to solve the mystery of what happens to the ship right before midnight each time the day repeats, Raelyn meets Kev Stevens, the former Special Forces soldier turned actor and finds herself falling in love with him. Each time the day repeats, she learns more about him while he has no memory of her. Can she persuade him they’ve met before? Will he trust her enough to help stop the Nebula Zephyr’s destruction?

And if they do save the ship, will that reset time for Raelyn?

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He Is Sorry Weekend Writing Warriors

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Taking excerpts now from my new release, TRATUS, a scifi romance novel.

I’ve jumped ahead to where we meet Katrin, who is a prisoner of the Khagrish scientists along with many other humans. She trying not to be noticed by the enemy or by the three handsome alien soldiers. Drawing attention is never a good idea in the labs. The ‘third man’ is of course TRATUS but she doesn’t know him yet.

Now the Khagrish and the men were inside the cell, walking slowly along the line of women. The alien leader passed her by without a second glance, which left her with an odd sense of relief.  The way he held himself made her think of a dangerous predator and she caught a whiff of what smelled like a high priced alcoholic feelgood as he walked along.

Could he be drunk this early in the day? What in the seven hells is going on here?

The leader indicated a woman and then another. The Khagrish guards dragged them out of line and bound their hands behind their backs. Now the man was making his second trip along the line, rubbing his chin and making remarks to Dr. Sheyall in Khagrish, which Katrin didn’t understand..

The third man stopped in front of her and she raised her head to stare into his eyes, which glowed slightly golden.

“I’m sorry,” he said in Basic, so quietly she could hardly hear it.

Next thing she knew he’d taken her by the arm and pulled her away from the other prisoners, holding her close to his side.

TRATUS: A BADARI WARRIORS SCIFI ROMANCE NOVEL (SECTORS NEW ALLIES SERIES BOOK 14) by Veronica Scott

Katrin Rodgerr, ex-Space Navy, was perfectly happy as Third Officer on a tramp freighter in the Outer Sectors, until the day she and everyone on board the ship were kidnapped by alien scientists to become subjects of gruesome experiments. Far away from home or help, Katrin does her best to bolster the other prisoners’ morale and look for a way to escape.

Until one day she’s chosen for an experiment of another sort – given to a pack of alien supersoldiers as a prospective breeder.

Tratus, senior enforcer of the Tzibir pack, never expected to find his mate, much less to meet her among the human prison population of the labs. But there she is and there’s no denying the instincts. Despite his Alpha’s objections, Tratus manages to convince the alien scientists to give Katrin to him and he vows to protect her. Deeply unhappy with the way his leader runs the pack as he disobeys all their goddess’s commandments and refuses to ally with other Badari packs to fight the scientists who created them, Tratus plots a revolt.

Despite herself Katrin is drawn to the giant humanoid warrior with alien predator DNA who treats her so respectfully. His scales and other differences from human males only make him more attractive in his own way. But the Alpha distrusts her and Tratus, and time is running out for them both…Can Tratus defeat the Alpha leading his pack to inevitable doom? Can he and Katrin survive the consequences and find their way to claiming each other as true mates or must he let her go?

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They Lie Snippet from TRATUS Badari Warriors SciFi Romance

May be edited a bit from published version.

…from TRATUS, a scifi romance novel.

From the beginning of the novel. I’ve jumped ahead a bit and now they’re in Dr. Ghazhing’s ( the head scientist) conference room, waiting to begin their meeting. Briator is the Alpha of the pack, to whom Tratus reports.

“Gentlemen, meet Commander Martinggleer, newly arrived from Home World,” Ghazhing said as the officer gave Briator a curt nod and sat down without invitation. “He’ll soon put this small problem of your escaped comrades to rest, I’m sure.”

Briator lolled in his chair, apparently unconcerned. “I don’t care what happens to them as long as you honor the agreements with my pack. We were the chosen DNA line after all.” His words were a bit slurred but he held himself well. The new security chief assessed Briator with an expressionless face and squared his shoulders as if readying himself for a fight.

A battle the Badari would win, even if the Alpha was drunk. Tratus knew they could easily take everyone in this room but fighting their way out of the entire complex was dubious. He habitually made and discarded contingency plans constantly while he was inside the Khagrish walls, just in case. Cerodan, the other enforcer did the same.

“I’m afraid I have bad news,” Ghazhing began. “Three of your men didn’t survive the last field exercise. Killed in combat by the enemy. We were unable to retrieve the bodies.”

They lie. The words crept into Tratus’s head, along a tight beam from Welner, one of the other pack soldiers who’d been sent on the same combat mission. Every word he’ll speak is a lie. Nothing happened as they say. Ondre was executed by the Khagrish, on Ghazhing’s orders. Ragle and Hagiro died trying to defend him. Briator requested the elimination of the other Alpha. Don’t trust the Khagrish or Briator.

Tratus feared his knees would give out from the weight of the shock. With a tremendous effort he kept his outwardly calm demeanor. This was a true disaster, not only because of the death of pack brothers, but because Ondre, the dead Alpha was the man he’d sworn to follow if he defeated Briator in a confrontation which was to have occurred when Ondre came back from this mission.

TRATUS: A BADARI WARRIORS SCIFI ROMANCE NOVEL (SECTORS NEW ALLIES SERIES BOOK 14) by Veronica Scott

Katrin Rodgerr, ex-Space Navy, was perfectly happy as Third Officer on a tramp freighter in the Outer Sectors, until the day she and everyone on board the ship were kidnapped by alien scientists to become subjects of gruesome experiments. Far away from home or help, Katrin does her best to bolster the other prisoners’ morale and look for a way to escape.

Until one day she’s chosen for an experiment of another sort – given to a pack of alien supersoldiers as a prospective breeder.

Tratus, senior enforcer of the Tzibir pack, never expected to find his mate, much less to meet her among the human prison population of the labs. But there she is and there’s no denying the instincts. Despite his Alpha’s objections, Tratus manages to convince the alien scientists to give Katrin to him and he vows to protect her. Deeply unhappy with the way his leader runs the pack as he disobeys all their goddess’s commandments and refuses to ally with other Badari packs to fight the scientists who created them, Tratus plots a revolt.

Despite herself Katrin is drawn to the giant humanoid warrior with alien predator DNA who treats her so respectfully. His scales and other differences from human males only make him more attractive in his own way. But the Alpha distrusts her and Tratus, and time is running out for them both…Can Tratus defeat the Alpha leading his pack to inevitable doom? Can he and Katrin survive the consequences and find their way to claiming each other as true mates or must he let her go?

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Pay More Attention Weekend Writing Warriors

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Taking excerpts now from my new release, TRATUS, a scifi romance novel.

From the beginning of the novel, continuing on directly from last week:

Tratus rubbed his chest, where the pack bond tying him to all his pack brothers ached. He tried to reach out along the link to discover what was wrong but could only detect two of the five men he was expecting to sense. Despite being a highly dominant enforcer, he was too far away geographically to link to the men left behind at their new settlement but he should have been able to connect to the squad of five they were here to pick up after a deployment.

He lectured himself as he walked behind Briator and Ghazhing. Now wasn’t the time to let his mind wander. A Badari needed all his wits about him when dealing with the Khagrish. Briator was half drunk already on his day’s ration of human feelgoods and liable to agree to anything Dr. Ghazhing wanted from this meeting, to ensure the supply of his intoxicants was uninterrupted. With a suppressed sigh, Tratus paid more attention to the discussion.

“Yes, the home world sent us a replacement security chief,” Ghazhing was saying. “Knows his place, knows how to work with scientific authority in the proper style.”

By which he means, knows how to be a yes man to the scientists, Tratus thought. Which thankfully will make him less effective.

TRATUS: A BADARI WARRIORS SCIFI ROMANCE NOVEL (SECTORS NEW ALLIES SERIES BOOK 14) by Veronica Scott

Katrin Rodgerr, ex-Space Navy, was perfectly happy as Third Officer on a tramp freighter in the Outer Sectors, until the day she and everyone on board the ship were kidnapped by alien scientists to become subjects of gruesome experiments. Far away from home or help, Katrin does her best to bolster the other prisoners’ morale and look for a way to escape.

Until one day she’s chosen for an experiment of another sort – given to a pack of alien supersoldiers as a prospective breeder.

Tratus, senior enforcer of the Tzibir pack, never expected to find his mate, much less to meet her among the human prison population of the labs. But there she is and there’s no denying the instincts. Despite his Alpha’s objections, Tratus manages to convince the alien scientists to give Katrin to him and he vows to protect her. Deeply unhappy with the way his leader runs the pack as he disobeys all their goddess’s commandments and refuses to ally with other Badari packs to fight the scientists who created them, Tratus plots a revolt.

Despite herself Katrin is drawn to the giant humanoid warrior with alien predator DNA who treats her so respectfully. His scales and other differences from human males only make him more attractive in his own way. But the Alpha distrusts her and Tratus, and time is running out for them both…Can Tratus defeat the Alpha leading his pack to inevitable doom? Can he and Katrin survive the consequences and find their way to claiming each other as true mates or must he let her go?

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He Had No Choice Weekend Writing Warriors

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May be edited a bit from published version.

Taking excerpts now from my new release, TRATUS, a scifi romance novel.

From the beginning of the novel: 

Tratus always questioned his own sanity when he voluntarily walked into a Khagrish lab complex. Of course he was following Briator, the Alpha of his Tzibir pack and therefore really had no choice. The Alpha’s decrees were not to be challenged and Briator had gambled the lives of his entire pack on the alliance he’d made with the alien scientists who created them.

Watching his Alpha greet Dr. Ghazhing, the Chief Scientist, like an old friend, turned his stomach but Tratus was good at maintaining a stoic expression and giving away nothing of his true feelings. How could Briator disregard the years of experiments, torture and death the Tzibir had been subjected to, along with the other two Badari packs, to make common cause with the Khagrish now?

Not for the first time, Tratus wished they’d made an alliance with Jill Garrison the day she freed them from the original lab. Life would be very different.  Briator had assumed the human and her mate Aydarr would fail in their rebellion and quickly be recaptured so he refused to ally with them. Instead of proving him right, the other Badari were doing a creditable job of destroying labs, freeing human prisoners and remaining out of the reach of the Khagrish. All of which added up to victory in Tratus’s mind. Those other Badari were free…and he was still tethered to their masters.

TRATUS: A BADARI WARRIORS SCIFI ROMANCE NOVEL (SECTORS NEW ALLIES SERIES BOOK 14) by Veronica Scott

Katrin Rodgerr, ex-Space Navy, was perfectly happy as Third Officer on a tramp freighter in the Outer Sectors, until the day she and everyone on board the ship were kidnapped by alien scientists to become subjects of gruesome experiments. Far away from home or help, Katrin does her best to bolster the other prisoners’ morale and look for a way to escape.

Until one day she’s chosen for an experiment of another sort – given to a pack of alien supersoldiers as a prospective breeder.

Tratus, senior enforcer of the Tzibir pack, never expected to find his mate, much less to meet her among the human prison population of the labs. But there she is and there’s no denying the instincts. Despite his Alpha’s objections, Tratus manages to convince the alien scientists to give Katrin to him and he vows to protect her. Deeply unhappy with the way his leader runs the pack as he disobeys all their goddess’s commandments and refuses to ally with other Badari packs to fight the scientists who created them, Tratus plots a revolt.

Despite herself Katrin is drawn to the giant humanoid warrior with alien predator DNA who treats her so respectfully. His scales and other differences from human males only make him more attractive in his own way. But the Alpha distrusts her and Tratus, and time is running out for them both…Can Tratus defeat the Alpha leading his pack to inevitable doom? Can he and Katrin survive the consequences and find their way to claiming each other as true mates or must he let her go?

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Pharaoh’s Newest Recruit Weekend Writing Warriors

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The snippet – the POV of Senebkai, the heroine’s 9 year old brother. He’s just taken his oath to Pharaoh and now General Marnamaret re-enters the situation.

…the man who stepped forward was young like Pharaoh. With a cheerful face, the skin around his eyes crinkled as he smiled. He was tall and walked with the carriage of a warrior. He rested his fist on the golden falcon badge over his heart. “What is your command, Great One?”

“I assign this new soldier to you. Go with him now to his home and see the mother and sister are properly cared for.” Pharaoh leaned closer to Marnamaret and murmured, his voice carrying only as far as Senebkai’s keen ears. “There must be more to this story. Find out if this was a miscarriage of ma’at and justice under the Usurper. He mentioned her role in his father’s death and their family’s problems. I expect a report.”

Marnamaret saluted. “With pleasure, sir.”

Pharaoh turned to Senebkai. “I’ll see you again, no doubt. Go with my general. He will oversee your education and training, and will set your future assignments once your family issues have been resolved.”

Senebkai stepped aside, General Marnamaret drawing him out of Pharaoh’s path with a gentle tug on the sleeve.

Nat-re-Akhte rose. As the assemblage bowed, he walked away, exiting through the private door at the rear of the dais

Marnamaret and Senebkai regarded each other silently for a moment. The general held out his hand. “Allow me to be the first to congratulate you on your enlistment.”

VS Note: I’ll do another one or two snippets from this book but I’ll be releasing my next scifi romance TRATUS soon so then we’ll change books.

The book blurb: 1550 BCE – Forced by a vengeful Pharaoh to flee for her life and hide in the poorest section of Thebes, Lady Pebatma has scraped and struggled to support her ailing mother and young brother for the past two years. Now, out of funds with the rent to pay and no possessions left to sell, she begs the goddess Hathor for help. With a new pharaoh taking the throne, surely something can be done…

A powerful general in command of the army and best friend to Pharaoh, Marnamaret has everything a nobleman in Egypt could desire…except for true love. He refuses to settle for less. On a whim, he prays to Hathor to send him the woman of his dreams.Will the goddess answer these heartfelt petitions? And if she does, will Shai the god of Fate allow the course of two lives to be changed by love? For none can deny Fate….

Author’s Note: This is a connected series. Heiress of the Nile can be read as a standalone. Although it’s my newest novel, the story falls between Priestess and Warrior timewise and is set in the early days of this Pharaoh’s reign.

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Taking the Oath Weekend Writing Warriors

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I’m doing a few excerpts from HEIRESS OF THE NILE, my most recent ancient Egyptian paranormal romance.

The snippet – the POV of Senebkai, the heroine’s 9 year old brother. He’s just begged Pharaoh to listen his petition, the Great One has agreed and they’ve been talking. I’ve skipped a little bit ahead.

Pharaoh picked up his flail and the crook, crossing them over his chest and gazed beyond Senebkai to regard the avidly attentive crowd. “I am pleased to accept the oath of service from my newest soldier.”

Senebkai licked his lips and swallowed hard. Let him forgive me for reminding him. “And my wages?”

Fortunately Pharaoh remained unperturbed, merely tilting his head ever so slightly in agreement. “Edekh, have one month’s wages, plus a suitably generous signing bonus, brought immediately.”

“Yes, my lord.” The Chief Scribe bowed and sent an under scribe running on the errand.

The High Priest of Horus paced forward, dressed in finely pleated robes, wearing a leopard skin belted across his loins and holding a large, fragrant onion. He touched Senebkai gently on the shoulder to get his attention. “Kneel to your pharaoh, boy, place your hand on this sacred icon, symbol of eternal life, circle upon circle unending, and repeat the oath after me. I, state your name—”

This was all going too fast now but he stumbled into speech. “I, Senebkai…”

“Do solemnly swear by my immortal soul, under the eyes of the Great Ones of Egypt, I will defend Pharaoh and my country against all enemies, be they foreign or Egyptian, human or inhuman, and I will obey the orders of Pharaoh and any officers he appoints over me, according to Ma’at, the eternal truth, here and in the Afterlife.”

Senebkai repeated the entire oath, his voice strong and calm. This was what he wanted, had dreamed of since he was a small boy. And to make my oath directly to Pharaoh, not a bored recruiting officer…my father would be proud. Tears prickled in Senebkai’s eyes, and he swiped at them with his fist, pretending the onion affected him. The priest took a ceremonial knife from his belt, gripping it by the golden falcon’s head hilt and sliced off a thin ring of the onion, giving it to Senebkai to eat as the completion of the ritual, sealing him to Pharaoh’s service.

“Here are your wages,” Pharaoh said as Edekh handed Senebkai a fat leather purse full of clinking gold deben. “And now I give you my first order.” He considered his gathered nobles and soldiers then pointed the cobalt and gold officer’s flail at one man. “General Marnamaret.”

Senebkai’s heart sank. A general? How sympathetic will he be to my need to pay the landlord right away and to take proper care of my mother?

VS: Ah but we know Marnamaret is a very understanding person, since we met him earlier in these snippets. Next week – Pharaoh’s orders.

The book blurb: 1550 BCE – Forced by a vengeful Pharaoh to flee for her life and hide in the poorest section of Thebes, Lady Pebatma has scraped and struggled to support her ailing mother and young brother for the past two years. Now, out of funds with the rent to pay and no possessions left to sell, she begs the goddess Hathor for help. With a new pharaoh taking the throne, surely something can be done…

A powerful general in command of the army and best friend to Pharaoh, Marnamaret has everything a nobleman in Egypt could desire…except for true love. He refuses to settle for less. On a whim, he prays to Hathor to send him the woman of his dreams.Will the goddess answer these heartfelt petitions? And if she does, will Shai the god of Fate allow the course of two lives to be changed by love? For none can deny Fate….

Author’s Note: This is a connected series. Heiress of the Nile can be read as a standalone. Although it’s my newest novel, the story falls between Priestess and Warrior timewise and is set in the early days of this Pharaoh’s reign.

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An Honorable Profession Weekend Writing Warriors

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May be edited a bit from published version.

I’m doing a few excerpts from HEIRESS OF THE NILE, my most recent ancient Egyptian paranormal romance.

The snippet – the POV of Senebkai, the heroine’s 9 year old brother. He’s just begged Pharaoh to listen his petition and the Great One has agreed.

“My name is Senebkai, son of Hapuseneb and I wish to enlist as a soldier in the army, now, today.” He swallowed hard and forced the next words out because the request was the crux of the matter. “And I need the first month’s pay in advance.”

A ripple of laughter spread through the nobles, soldiers and commoners. Senebkai’s cheeks flushed hot with embarrassment, but he stubbornly remained where he was, head held high. Pharaoh had given him leave to speak and the only opinion of any consequence was his ruler’s.

“Silence.” Pharaoh quelled the merriment with one upraised hand. He leaned forward. “The request is unusual. You must have a compelling need to ask this.”

Senebkai glanced around involuntarily. “I—I would rather not share my business with all of Thebes, sir.”

“Come closer and tell me then,” Pharaoh answered kindly, beckoning with one hand. “As your sovereign I have the right to know what lies at the heart of this issue.”

Senebkai ascended the stairs, his knees threatening to buckle, going to stand right in front of the throne. Pharaoh leaned forward, elbow on his knee, hand cupping his chin. “Well?”

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Throwing his shoulders back as he’d been taught by his late father, standing at attention, he met Pharaoh’s keen eyes, rimmed in kohl, accented with malachite, taking every aspect of the boy in front of him. Senebkai suspected the Great One was weighing his ka and had to lock his knees to keep from trembling. Standing in front of the ruler of all Egypt was the most daunting thing he’d ever done but remembering why he was here loosened his tongue.  “It’s my mother, sir. She’s sick and we have no deben for a healer or medicines. And my sister has sold all our possessions from our old home, and now the new landlord says he’ll take her as a slave in payment of our debt. I’m the man of the house since the Usurper had my father killed. It’s my job to provide for my mother and sister. So I thought—”

“You thought soldiering was an honest profession and pays a fair wage.” Pharaoh nodded.

VS: I’ll probaby skip ahead a little here but finish this scene because this is how the main characters come together eventually. I should also note my Pharaoh is the father of a young son. And, of course no one is expecting Senebkai to go into combat untrained and so young. Although 4000 years ago, everybody did everything at younger ages!

The book blurb: 1550 BCE – Forced by a vengeful Pharaoh to flee for her life and hide in the poorest section of Thebes, Lady Pebatma has scraped and struggled to support her ailing mother and young brother for the past two years. Now, out of funds with the rent to pay and no possessions left to sell, she begs the goddess Hathor for help. With a new pharaoh taking the throne, surely something can be done…

A powerful general in command of the army and best friend to Pharaoh, Marnamaret has everything a nobleman in Egypt could desire…except for true love. He refuses to settle for less. On a whim, he prays to Hathor to send him the woman of his dreams.Will the goddess answer these heartfelt petitions? And if she does, will Shai the god of Fate allow the course of two lives to be changed by love? For none can deny Fate….

Author’s Note: This is a connected series. Heiress of the Nile can be read as a standalone. Although it’s my newest novel, the story falls between Priestess and Warrior timewise and is set in the early days of this Pharaoh’s reign.

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